Out of the Storm

Community Corner => Creative Expressions => Poetry & Creative Writing => Topic started by: Tee on September 21, 2021, 06:55:09 PM

Title: Wounded heart**TW**
Post by: Tee on September 21, 2021, 06:55:09 PM
In the silence of the night
The wounded heart beat echos
Drowned by the years of fight
The wounded heart beat echos

With each beat the screams recall
The wounded heart beat echos
The streams of tears begin to fall
The wounded heart beat echos

The words cut deep to the heart
The wounded heart beat echos
Hurting worse than being torn apart
The wounded heart beat echos

Innocence taken and beaten down
The wounded heart beat echos
The shell of life is all that's left now
The wounded heart beat echos

Lost in the world I hid in my head
The wounded heart beat echos
Invisibility my power to remain undead
The wounded heart beat echos

Trying to find my back from the dark
The wounded heart beat echos
Stuck underwater just unable to start
The wounded heart beat echos
Title: Re: Wounded heart**TW**
Post by: rainydiary on September 22, 2021, 12:20:56 AM
I felt this in my heart.  Thanks for sharing. 
Title: Re: Wounded heart**TW**
Post by: woodsgnome on September 22, 2021, 04:09:35 AM
It's always hard to say much if anything about the depths of the hurt that robs you of the peace you need. I sensed your pain, but also could plainly make out a hidden strength you showed in the powerful way you've shared here.

Wounded heart, but on reading this I sensed that strength as well. Strong enough to express the deep sadness, yet all the while drawing on an inner strength that can outlast the echo.

May that echo start to fade, so your surviving strong voice can overtake its uninvited presence.

Thank you so much for putting words to feelings that are so hard to ever explain. :hug:
Title: Re: Wounded heart**TW**
Post by: Tee on September 22, 2021, 02:22:52 PM
Thank you rainyday.  Woodsgnome thanks for your Encouraging words. :hug:
Title: Re: Wounded heart**TW**
Post by: Bach on September 22, 2021, 02:54:23 PM
I really appreciate you sharing this, Tee.  I'd like to be able to express some of what I feel this way, but I'm too scared.

Much love  :hug:
Title: Re: Wounded heart**TW**
Post by: Tee on September 22, 2021, 03:29:00 PM
Thanks Bach  :hug:
Title: Re: Wounded heart**TW**
Post by: Not Alone on October 09, 2021, 04:18:40 PM
 :grouphug: