Out of the Storm

Community Corner => Creative Expressions => Poetry & Creative Writing => Topic started by: Marian82 on September 06, 2020, 07:07:44 PM

Title: The ants
Post by: Marian82 on September 06, 2020, 07:07:44 PM
Never mind.


Title: Re: The ants
Post by: Hope67 on September 06, 2020, 07:17:18 PM
Hi Marian,
I really admire your creative writing, and I definitely see the messages you convey within it - I think it is really good. 
Hope  :)
Title: Re: The ants
Post by: Marian82 on September 06, 2020, 07:19:34 PM
Thanks!
Title: Re: The ants
Post by: BJeanGrey on September 15, 2020, 04:30:19 AM
It's very well written, Marian82.

Thanks kindly for sharing this.
Title: Re: The ants
Post by: Marian82 on September 16, 2020, 01:25:34 PM
Thank you...
Title: Re: The ants
Post by: bluepalm on September 22, 2020, 05:28:30 AM
Marian82 your story is a strong piece of writing. You manage to convey what you intended - without mentioning the abuse you conveyed it in other ways. I read this with my heart jumping for you for taking the left turn but then felt sad when you explained that, like me, you were in a controlling relationship and in reality it was not easy to turn left. I experienced similar autism/sociopathic/narcissism behaviour from my spouse and unfortunately it took me many years before I was able to turn left and start my long struggle to recover.  Thank you for sharing this. I'd encourage you to share more of your creative writing. Don't worry about little cross language issues - you write well. I wish I could write anything in a second language - I can't.
bluepalm
Title: Re: The ants
Post by: Marian82 on September 24, 2020, 02:54:01 PM
Thanks.

Sorry you too were in such a situation. Im happy you too, eventually, turned left. I did and managed (after a huge 2 year fight) to keep our child away from him.