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Title: TW Gasoline
Post by: Deep Blue on July 15, 2020, 02:29:28 AM

She was like gasoline
Volatile and explosive when provoked
And I?
I was the one that lit the match.
That it is why I am responsible

Title: Re: TW Gasoline
Post by: RiverRabbit on July 20, 2020, 08:07:40 PM

I love this. It is strikingly to the point... taking on responsibility for something that was already primed for ignition.

Strikingly... no pun intended. ;D

Title: Re: TW Gasoline
Post by: Deep Blue on July 22, 2020, 02:45:44 AM

Thanks river rabbit. I actually got a smile out of the pun. (Intended or not :bigwink:)

Title: Re: TW Gasoline
Post by: BJeanGrey on July 26, 2020, 05:14:29 AM

I get this - I love the imagery and how apt the analogy is, the image of an abusive person as gasoline. The slightest spark and they just explode out of control.

Out of the Storm

Community Corner => Creative Expressions => Poetry & Creative Writing => Topic started by: Deep Blue on July 15, 2020, 02:29:28 AM