Out of the Storm

Community Corner => Creative Expressions => Poetry & Creative Writing => Topic started by: Eyessoblue on December 09, 2017, 06:46:45 PM

Title: Darkness
Post by: Eyessoblue on December 09, 2017, 06:46:45 PM
Feeling black no light can I see
Separated and only me
Standing tall then falling low
No particular place to go
Fighting corners a troubled place
Moving slowly to find the space
Sunlight blocked and looking grey
I sit bewildered and don't know what to say
Crawling around feelin blue
Watching and waiting if only I knew
This blindfold removed and then free
But where is the best place for me to be
Crawling back in and sitting tight
I think I feel I've lost my fight.
Title: Re: Darkness
Post by: Blueberry on December 09, 2017, 11:07:11 PM
I admire your ability to turn your feelings into metre and rhymes when you're feeling bad.
Hope a little bit of light shines through sometime.