Out of the Storm

Community Corner => Creative Expressions => Poetry & Creative Writing => Topic started by: PaperDoll on January 11, 2024, 08:16:53 AM

Title: Memories
Post by: PaperDoll on January 11, 2024, 08:16:53 AM
I would like to share a poem I wrote inspired by my experience of struggling with the negative messages I received from my parents when I was a little girl about who I am and how I am now trying to reject these as an adult and find compassion for the brave little girl that survived.

Memories

Memories hold me
But they don't give comfort.
Instead, they chastise me.
Foolish little girl.

Memories wake me in the dead of night.
They shame me.
Bind my tongue and break me.
Bad little girl.

Memories hurt.
Insidious hurt that creeps.
Threaten me.
Lost little girl.

Memories remind me.
Shine a light on grief.
And how strong I've been.
Brave little girl.


Title: Re: Memories
Post by: NarcKiddo on January 11, 2024, 12:44:08 PM
That resonates and I love the last verse. "Brave little girl.". Yes, you are.
Title: Re: Memories
Post by: Kizzie on January 12, 2024, 12:04:18 AM
Memories remind me.
Shine a light on grief.
And how strong I've been.
Brave little girl.


Very brave little girl indeed  :grouphug:
Title: Re: Memories
Post by: blue_sky on January 19, 2024, 06:19:07 AM
Not foolish, not bad, not lost. Just an extraordinarily brave little girl  :hug: 
Title: Re: Memories
Post by: Bermuda on January 19, 2024, 08:52:06 AM
That is a beautiful poem.
Title: Re: Memories
Post by: woodsgnome on January 21, 2024, 01:17:11 AM
Brave little girl, indeed ...

To take the words of the heart and transform the dark into the new light you find yourself in.

Then, now ... thank you for sharing it here.

 :grouphug: 
Title: Re: Memories
Post by: BecomingMe on April 08, 2024, 09:08:22 PM
Quote from: blue_sky on January 19, 2024, 06:19:07 AMNot foolish, not bad, not lost. Just an extraordinarily brave little girl  :hug: 

I second this  :hug: