Out of the Storm

Community Corner => Creative Expressions => Poetry & Creative Writing => Topic started by: SharpAndBlunt on August 26, 2018, 11:55:28 PM

Title: Vacuum Packed
Post by: SharpAndBlunt on August 26, 2018, 11:55:28 PM
This is a 2 line poem I made called Vacuum Packed. The poem is about wanting to connect but not being able to feel any connection to the outside.
I had never tried poetry but I attempted to on the suggestion of a friend. Most I threw out but I kind of like this one. It interests me because the language seems quite innocent and lighthearted but at the same time the image is kind of horrific   :Idunno:

Vacuum Packed
I don't extend much past my skin,
And that's a pickle to be in!